Wednesday, December 7, 2016

Empire And Vampire Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cruel Imperialist! Why did you forget,
Time does not remain always the same!
While sucking blood of weaker people,
And that too, in His great name!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 08 December 2016

A great truth told in powerful verse! When I read your poem, I was reminded of Shelley's Ozymandias mocking at the hegemony and vanity of a king......! In time, a tyrant king may remain a despicable memory in the pages of History! Great write!

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 December 2016

A poem that fits on all the empires, great and thoughtful.

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Abdur-rehman Qadeer 07 December 2016

slave died... but slavery didn't... and perhaps it can never...

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Nosheen Irfan 07 December 2016

What a deep thoughtful write. You have hit the nail on the head. Imperialistic ruler must face karma. Power-drunk ruler forgets that death comes to all, slave or emperor. History doesn't forgive the tyrant. A huge 10.

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