How sensitive are your ears? Can they hear the drops of tears?
You can hear the falling of the rain, why can't you hear the splash of pain?
How well can you see? Can you discern building clouds of misery?
You can notice the forming of a storm, why can't you see happiness' face deform?
...
Read full text
One of the best poems I have ever read about empathy. So well presented and expressed. Liked the analogy and stunning images and the brilliant thoughts to ponder about. What a wonderful world we have if we practice empathy. To my favorites.
Another terrific poem! Well met indeed! We all need keener senses. Keep writing!
There is such depth in this formidable poem, into human nature and feelings, hat it becomes a masterpiece of expression and an unforgettable work reaching very extraordinary poetic ceilings. Truly amazing and wonderful! To my best ever, list!