Monday, September 17, 2012

Emotive Language Comments

Rating: 4.8

If she passed, would mine break?
Would there be any display
or curtain's not even close
of being drawn?
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Kelvin Owusu
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Nader Baheri 21 September 2012

very impressive and emotional. mucha gracias.

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Elena Sandu 18 September 2012

Touching, filled with emotion, one could feel shivers of wonders, loved this poem, thank you for share!

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 17 September 2012

Yes, it is indeed a language of emotions which can be packed in whatever way by the poet and by the one who reads. Saying goodbye also means I miss you. I like it!

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Stevie Taite 17 September 2012

Second guessing the feelings of another, love and learn, shaping our hearts form! Very good sir! X

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Gabrielle Marie 17 September 2012

Lovers questions, packed in a beautiful rythm,

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Kelvin Owusu

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