Open the window to open my mind,
letting the anger and fears from me to be taken out.
Drive me to a fantasy journey that drags me back on time,
and allow the sound of the air to be what accompanies the echo of an alleviation shout.
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Doors and windows seem to be used when writing about the self. Emotions and feelings are a big part. I like your idea and the images it creates to the reader. Very strong and creative. You have a good imagination! :) Deborah Cromer
A therapeutic treatment to the soul...sure it is a good poem....thank you