Thursday, May 18, 2023

Emotions And Nature - Senryu Comments

Rating: 5.0

thick clouds in the sky
trying hard to hide the moon
I'm under blanket.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 May 2023

An outstanding senryu. Love the images!

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Brilliant depiction of emotions tinged with the wonders and mysteries of nature. Top Marks! ! !

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S H 18 May 2023

First one - Hide and seek in love. Second one- Emotional plea Third one - Separation. Could have been a story

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Rajan T Renganathan 18 May 2023

Goes to my fav list now, Very crafty haikus - with three different flavours. Vanilla, Mango and Tutti-frutti...

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M. Asim Nehal

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