Saturday, October 10, 2009

Emotions Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hate for many things
Anger everyday
Like an emotional bomb
Soon to go off, for unknown reasons
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Leila Mass
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Gita Ashok 21 June 2010

A fabulous write on emotions. To make it tick faster To make it closer to exploding I feel too much pain Or none at all The above lines convey the varying intensities of anger that we all experience at times.

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Gold Fish 10 October 2009

Nice composition on emotions. It's very true. The extremes of emotion from highly intense to completely numb. If bottled up, emotions will eat you from the inside out causes disease, mental derangement and all other kinds of maladies. I look forward to more poems in the future.10+

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