Pain, sadness, lonesome,
All of these emotions are things I used to feel.
But now you made me feel,
Happiness, joy and love.
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Thank you for writing this because i feel the exact same way.
A very telling poem of your life. I think you did a wonderful job of explaining and coming to terms with living. A more mature writing than others. True EMOTIONS. GW62
i can see u are a very deep thinker? its good stuff, u get the picture of the whole event, u keep it simple, thts whts best about ur poems
Such an emotional out pour of your heart. Wonderful expression that pulls at the heart strings. Great piece 10 Best wishes Jon