Saturday, February 9, 2013

Emotions Comments

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Love is a deep emotion we have for one another
It is shared by a friend, father, mother or a lover
The giving of ones self of something tried and true
Can either break the heart or make you feel like new
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Patricia Grantham
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Amitava Sur 27 October 2013

Very well detailing about five diff. emotions with the conclusion given ......... The choices that you make will determine how you live Will always be a part of us to accept or either to give ........ very nice.

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Elena Plotkin 26 August 2013

I love the way describe all five Emotions- Love, Happiness, Joy, Peace, and Hate.Your words evoke such meaning. I just wish you added a sixth stanza tying all the emotions together.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 August 2013

Emotion thou art on the canvas of heart...

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Valsa George 12 August 2013

Joy will last forever, something you won't have to mend Wells up like a spring of water that seems to have no end Hate at last can destroy you or can eat away at your heart Try to put it far behind you and make a brand new start These lines beautifully portray the two cardinal emotions.... one life giving, the other life damaging! ! Loved reading this great poem!

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Ramesh Rai 02 August 2013

you have beautifully crafted different types of emotions viz love, peace, joy, happiness n hate. these r different stages of our life n we act accordingly n express our emotion. life flows with such emotions. without emotion life is barren. i too have written one poem with the same title. if you may kindly spare your valuable time whenever feasible please do read. i like to add this one in my list. with kind regards

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 25 July 2013

speechless..! ! ! you really describe the emotions with incontrovertible words

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Payal Parande 23 July 2013

P E R F E C T........

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Louis Rams 05 June 2013

on this one pat -just one word GREAT

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 June 2013

Love, happiness, joy, and peace are clearly presented. Hate must be put far behind. Peace is like the rivers of water flowing calmly down the Nile. Poem of great beauty.

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Dave Walker 11 March 2013

Love and hate are two emotions that can go hand in hand. A fantastic poem.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 14 February 2013

Describing each emotion, mainly love- then -Happiness and joy, Peace and hate, are all exemplary in the beautiful poem with rhyme and rhythm is really captivating. Thanks for the kind invite, else I'd have missed reading a fabulous poem.! !

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Valerie Dohren 13 February 2013

Great tribute to love. Very well penned.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 11 February 2013

Various emotions well defined with reality.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 February 2013

When love is at its best. Very very fine poem. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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