Friday, March 16, 2012

Emotions Comments

Rating: 4.5

Joy is golden like the sunset
Not always lasting
Sorrow is black
Like the empty hole it leaves ion you
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Dreamin Big
COMMENTS
Julie Smith 25 February 2013

Nice contrasts. Vivid pictures come to mind with your descriptions.

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Amanda Laurent 28 October 2012

I really like the last two lines :) and thought you did a good job in attributing the sense of taste to an emotion (love as juicy and sweet) . Keep it up!

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