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emotions cannot be humble...wonderful line...i too feel that sometimes...all tied in knots...no flowing thoughts that can translate into words and lines...regards

I love the peom it is so corect in confusion and saddness. It is exacly how i do feel.

Words sleep deep within awaiting the kiss to bring them to life, the twinkling of a family eye, to walk the beach under clear blue sky, to sit and watch the blossom fall, the beautiful sound of the Skylarks call. These are the kisses of awakening. Not forgetting friendships hand. Thoughtful write Chris 10

Yeah I also feel same way Sometime it just flows non stop sometime words never seem to come an excellent write

This is really a fantastic piece, I love it lots regards Tom

Your rush of truth is so amiable. Thanks, arya

Cute poem, good play on the whole concept of poems. Light hearted but sincere.

Lovely analogy. Love the comparison and play on words.