Thursday, March 15, 2018

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Rating: 5.0

Maybe we expect too much from those we love
Perhaps it's a lot to expect that they be loyal and faithful
She thought of how it could be a privilege for her to at least have a 1 minute talk with her man as some kids never get to have that
She has tried to be all he could ever want
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Tebogo Angela Poen
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 March 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Angela P. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 March 2018

Angela, such a well expressed poem....10+++++

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Tebogo Angela Poen 16 March 2018

Thank you ☺ 🙏

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Tebogo Angela Poen 16 March 2018

Thank you Bernard

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Rajnish Manga 16 March 2018

A very powerful commentary on man-woman relationship and the hypocrisy of male mentality. Women have always been at the receiving end. The concluding lines carry an advice for course correction. How sad: She has tried to be all he could ever want Tried to do all he could ever wish for But.... Now that is what's enough!

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Tebogo Angela Poen 16 March 2018

I'm humbled. Thank you ☺

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Gajanan Mishra 15 March 2018

voice to speak, enough is enough, good write

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Tebogo Angela Poen 16 March 2018

Thank you ☺🙏

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