Emotional Perfect Tense; Modes Of 8 And 3 Comments
In the course of watching the movie over my face, something becomes really plain,
There is a kind of fall-in-love sensation growing either inside or outside on a plane
When the dropp falls upon my head soon after the burning sunny weather in the rain,
Thoughts turn into a sort of chaos, whereby hearts are suffering due to the blocked drain
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Very original style, with long verses and the same rhyme persisting throughout a stanza. The style makes the reader feel the intenseness and the unchangeability of the authors feelings for the person concerned. The word choice is also very good. I really got submersed in the poem and felt along with you. Very good!
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7/18/2025 11:41:04 PM # 1.0.0
A very different type poem, as in a story telling. Could feel the emotion and intentions of the writer. Well expressed and lovely read! ; D