Emotional Bursts Comments

its a really emotional and motivating poem

i am11 years i do poetry and this is one of the most amaizing poems i ever read

you are my inspiration i poetry

Emotional burst out with sudden good news, Nothing in sight but call for reviews,

No hopes for success but call for interviews, Where chances for success little or few,

All of sudden tears roll out, No reason and nothing about, No defeat, no victory and no rout, Still reality and sudden fall out,

well it takes after suddenjoy....10

joy creaates over joy....10

when u r suddenly overjoyed....10

ater so much joy it takes place...10

I am unable to pick a certain line to comment on. The entire poem is outstanding! Your words grabbed me from start to finish with smooth sailing the entire way. Marvalously written.10

it is after getting very good news...10

sudden joy leads into emotional bursts....10

some excitment leads to that....10

joy gives suddenburts....10

suceeds after so much joy....10

sudden joy leads to emotional burts....10

over joy leads to bursts...10

sudden excitment lead to burst...10

more joy leads to this stage...10