Saturday, August 5, 2023

Emotional Blackmail Comments

Rating: 5.0

(An old poem from my premarital years)
What had yah think of guys,
who plead you with such beseeching cries
and threaten to even take their own lives
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Denis Mair 12 August 2023

A TELEGRAM OF HIS SUICiDE WOULD Be BLACK MAiL INDEED.' This has your characteristic zing, but it's deadly serious. He is wrapped in a bubble of delusion, and you use laughter to burst it.

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Kevin Patrick 11 August 2023

Love those lines, in fact I like the whole thing, people confuse the thirst for for the labor of love. If you loves you they dont go around manipulating their paramours against their will. That's just a narcissus

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Kevin Patrick 11 August 2023

Lover are knowing for goodbyes and surprises

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M.J. Lemon 08 August 2023

A very dark and very profound verse. An exceptional verse!

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Denis Mair 06 August 2023

Your commonsense remarks about courting show a wholesome view of relationships. I'm glad you dug this out of your old papers.

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Richard Wlodarski 06 August 2023

2) With psychiatric intervention, that vicious cycle can be broken. And the respective parties can move on with their lives. Your very mature and well written poem brings much-needed attention to a very sensitive subject. Excellent work worthy of top marks!

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Richard Wlodarski 06 August 2023

Those types of lovers are in need of professional counselling. The sooner the better! Laying such a guilt trip on their lover is the worst mind game possible.

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A black mail Vs blackmail! Loved it…

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Port Hart corte (place of birth)
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