Sunday, May 25, 2008

Emoticon Time (Canto In Two Parts)) Comments

Rating: 5.0

1) 'And now, the end is near'...IMHO
2) Everything has got its end, but 'the struggle is not yet over'...LOL
1) I didn't know this world as well as didn't know you
2) I had seen you 'around the world'
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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello
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The two explanations of my poem by David Desantis are both right.

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David Desantis 17 June 2008

yes, i agree w/ onelia's comments..i liked the poem, allthough i wasn't sure exactly what it was referencing...the sadness of computer style 'emoticon' relationships? or how love can become like empty emoticons...great effort freind.

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Onelia Avelar 29 May 2008

Dear poet, may i ask you :) why are you so sad? No future for the poetry? Are you sure? ...you see i destroyed the spell 'Today nobody asks the poets nothing'- i just asked you something...Innovation in style, yes - i agree with Yoonoos Peerbocus!

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