Emo Comments

what have you done? a black cloud of pain as emotions disappear. once we were together in innocence, wide-eyed and untainted, but your thirst drifted away. a painful fever of agony - tears follow darkness, follow rain, love ground to dust. in a storm of righteousness, i see you.. iip

Great poem. I have voted it a ten. You wrote it more than seven years ago. I hope you're feeling better about yourself by now.

i hope i can wrote that way....

I agree with u on this one

i think i agree with Anabel! the ideas are good but where is the poem

this is a great poem.

great poem but do you mean it?

I great poem who explains how emo kids feel.