Emma… Comments

A poignant write. A vivid depiction of loneliness of two people in love. A very passionate song of love. Beautifully crafted.

I love this poem, you convey the idea of the poem well. Thank you for your kind words on my poem!

Thank you for your kind revue of my lullaby. Your poem Emma certainly does reflect all the suffering that is caused by wars that are created by a handful of greedy capitalists or fanatic ''wantabes'' I sincerely hope that one day soon the silent majority will stand up and tell these idiots that its time to shut up, be quiet and start acting like human beings. The sun shines for every one on this earth and no one should have the right to deprive others of their happiness no matter how trivial in their eyes this happiness can be.

a grieve of joyous attire, cloth with passion of the heart....such an opulent of the past waited to long to come again in the memory of today..... oh! let the day come again to stay with me.....wishing my emotion to conquer the shield of reality....beautiful my friend...God bless....a 10 +++++

reaches out to the soul....beautifully written..10/10...

Your poem is very nice and eloquent to read. Greatly emotion is blended here. True poem 10+

'Tracking stars and moon She moves through times bygone' Rachel Ann Butler

It's a beautiful piece of writing this and a sad lament attatched to it. Reminded me of 'Danny Boy' for some reason------10

very expressive..touching.. voices of grieving hearts... wonderful piece..... looking forward to any further piece on their love's journey.. until we can read their voices of love answered...(smile) very entertaining 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

a song beyond love of words.... tuely form heart of us Walking sad and lone Tracking stars and moon He moves through times bygone… He moves through times bygone… Emma……Emma…Emma! (She loves it...)

Dear Kesav really sensitive and truly poem...I think you must be lover..and its fine..Kesav..10+

Hi Kesav, dare I say it: it sounds almost like a Greek tragedy in structure or maybe an epic opera. But it needs more espansion. It needs a sequel and a prequel. We need to find out more about Peter and Emma: who they are, what they have done, why are they apart...enea

A very sensitive and touchy theme - many such separated hearts are there. Strange is life! ! Those who crave for togatherness have to bear separation and there are such people as well, who dwell together, but still are miles apart. Far or near, that there is love is something really nice, beautiful and gratifying. Liked your idea of giving a musical touch to the poem. Regards, Vanita.

A magical cantata..the melody of the crescendo of love and decrescendo of sadness..well orchestrated..you are a master performer, indeed!

such a musical composition............liked it!

Very well penned Kesav... when you have published the song on U Tube let us all hear it Fond regards Alf

Unique and quite poignant, very well put together Kesav, 10 Lynda xx

A haunting piece, both beautiful and unique. 10/10. Always your friend, Sandra

reading this is like watching an Opera, Kesav. you have tenderly expressed a need for beloved left back home, two hearts yearning for togetherness. in a way you are talking about long distance relationships. you chose a very british name which itself to my mind goes well with th song. you are experimenting a lot with forms, its very motivating. sad and lovely 10 Mamta

Good blend of love and sadness... and love again... It's beautiful indeed... :)