Emily Comments

I see Ophelia in your Emily. Ophelia before drowning, insane in love.... Hamlet could have never been brave enough, if Ophelia hadn´t killed herself.

This is a beautiful poem, the flow worthy of our Emily Dickinson!

yes why trample? good poem though.

Beautifully stated. I loved your poem very much.

This is another great write Will, what did you have for breakfast, sounds like we should all be eating it! Love duncan X

this is quite haunting especially now. excellent, moving work. -Tailor

Loved this one Will... beautifully visionary

very beautiful in a haunting sort of feel...glad to have found your poetry

Sadness is pervasive in this fragile and beautiful poem. Very touching, Will. Your poetess friend, Sandra

I like this a lot Will, it has a tenderness to it that drenches each line. The flow is gorgeousand dreamlike. I think that the last line is outstanding. The poem ceases to be about an individual and alters into a communal spirit.