' Emeralds And Black Diamonds... Comments
Lie down lass, with me, in sage green meadows
Your blouse flouncing open, in the teasing breeze
The meadows, feel so cotton, this time of year
Come lay beside me, and sense my desires.
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Lovely sensuous poems. Congratulations. This poem ranks #02 in the Best Poems of Members today on PoemHunter. All the best
wow brilliant..! amazing sharing.. I love to write as well, have my own poetry so please check out..
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Beautiful and brilliant flow of words and imagery. I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for sharing
Come close, love, as these hungry emerald eyes Beg to stare into your warm, black diamond eyes//// superb and great writings on love; impressive poem, love it
Take my hand in bond, I assure you, my lov', That emeralds and diamonds never fade away.....................WOW! Mesmerizing poem, FjR. I know you since Poetfreak and you create still and more..... loveliest, more sensitive....Thank you for introducing and sharing these Emeralds and Black Diamonds...A 10 full vote. To MyPoemList.G.B.U. in Abundance. Amen
Thank You so much, Sylvia...Your all too generous comments are very appreciated!
This poem had a surprise twist, as we never suspected from the title that Emeralds and Black Diamonds would refer to eyes. A lovely and creative work!
Hello, Ms. Practicing Poetess, whose practice has reaped much literary fruit...Thank You for the visit, and your comment. You Rock!
Come close, love, as these hungry emerald eyes Beg to stare into your warm, black diamond eyes Take my hand in bond, I assure you, my lov',
Sunita, thank you very much for your comment and support!
Thank You, Doctor. I very much appreciate your return visit and support of my work. ~FjR~
Lovely...lovely poetic expression! A marvelous poem! My pleasure reading it time and again my friend! (10)
Whatever this means, I appreciate the visit, and hope that the G stands for Good?
Brilliantly written. For someone, difficult is it to ignore such a passionate call of love. Thank you very much for sharing this wonderful poem with us.
Thank You, Chanden for your visit to my work and far too generous comments...Very much appreciated.~FjR~
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7/25/2025 8:17:46 AM # 1.0.0
These are such delicate words and convey a beautiful yearning for love. Love this.