Emerald Lady Serpent Comments

This is an exceptional work, Nika. I think some mythologies say that emerald is the stone that conceals the goddess....Now that emerald snake and the vision of a goddess....Magnificent, Nika!

Part 2. you had be feeling as if I were standing there watching it Against rough-edged mossy green boulders. You have WoW descriptive skills. That last stanza was perfect - -absolutely perfect in its quest for privacy. 10+++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list.

Part 1. My breaking point therein became / My break-through - - - - ] that is as succinct and powerful a piece of wisdom that I have ever seen. Welllllllll done! ! But your skills continue- -that description of the movement of that emerald serpent was so spot on,

I have transformed In ways not all can detect As ambiguous as a lady serpent Whose verdant coils of flesh have dragged the grassy fields for many a day. as always your excellence is in your beautiful expressions. wrirte dear poetess. you are talented. tony

Dear Nila, such a fine poem👍👍👍

No, I'll keep it in a golden locket/Precious as a timeworn photograph/Tucking it close to my heart…lovely expression! What a beautiful poem Nika! Loved reading it…10

Sometimes change comes fast and we witness this change. But having transformation is of course to develop self. This poem is definitely very interestingly and brilliantly penned...10