Embracing Persephone Comments

I tried to think of something to praise in this grand work - but then my praise would be far longer than the poem! Deep, complex - and fresh perspective on a myth which resonates through the (cluttered) house of my mind. Wonderful, staggering.

Speaking my type of English, you are Hugh. Eximious (archaic, I know) as always. Head & shoulders above the endless sea of usual mediocrity. Reminded me of a little piece I penned a while back but not posted at PH yet. In the interim, may I suggest my 'Paradigm' poem in which the peregrinating Persephone in mentioned early on. GWG

hugh this is a beautifully wrought web. an absolute delight to ingest. thank you. best wishes, stephanie

A good blend of humor and romance. Some great ension and excitement well expressed here. The tie to the current realm is seemless and the use of the classic strain is flawlessly observed. Well done.

Wow. Knowing how I live, this made me waver somewhere between humour and guilt! Full of excellent observations and one liners.

The use of the classic to express the romantic isexcellent. The tension and preperation of the wait is described perfectly.