Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Embrace The Planet Comments

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I suggest you hugging the planet.
if for other things you're too young.
'didn't give enough, no money'-
that's eternal question of man.
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Daniel Brick 17 February 2016

Your poem highlights our challenge to fulfill the two commandments Jesus told a young man were the only essential ones: Love God/Love your neighbor. The crisis that inspired your poem reminds Tolstoy was tormented by the fact he could love humanity as an abstraction but found many individuals unlovable. We could complacent and say, So it goes. But you are unwilling to give up on ALTRUISM which is a new theme in your poems and because of your influence I've been dealing with it. I agree human beings are weak when it comes to cosmic tasks, but we were created according to Scriptures as limited beings. We can't compare to angels in power. Arguably more is expected of human beings than of angels. Of course none of this matters, Tolstoy's torment, God'silence, my doubts if you are blessed with faith! !

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