Sunday, November 26, 2017

Embrace The Dilema Comments

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Is this normal? I can hear my heart beat
I can feel my brain breathe, even in my sleep, I can feel, I can here myself pant
In my own dilemma, I am thrown aback
It feels like success here is failure there
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Jesking Amu
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Chinedu Dike 02 December 2017

An beautiful philosophical piece nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful poem with good rendition of words. Thanks for sharing Jesking.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2017

Struggles and pains! ! With the muse of life! Failure is part of life. We only learn along the line. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jesking Amu 27 November 2017

thanks for the kind comments, i'm ecstatic about the fact that you enjoyed it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

Failure is not an obstacle to success. This is interesting poem wisely penned.10

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Jesking Amu 27 November 2017

i'm glad you enjoyed it. thank you

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