Embrace Of Twilight Comments
At eight o'clock as the sun
Dipped below the rooftops
I sat in the garden with a
Coffee laced with Scotch.
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Oh, So truly Captivating! .. Such Amazing beauty and feeling written into this! .. Way Beyond #S! .. You are ever so gifted! ..+++++++++++++++++++
Colorful and picturesque expression of nature in twilight zone. Beautiful poem. The sentences 'Red and yellow dahlias caressed The twilight, where by morning Old petals will have given way To new buds softly emerging.' are really picturesque.
This poem continues its journey to the top. Today @#16. Congratulations, David
Moved up to position #18. Congratulations, David
I just looked for the comment I had posted sometime back. But it is missing. Vagaries of ph.. And congratulations, David. This poem ranks #20 in the BestMemberPoems today
Thanks for you comments Unnikrishnan, it seems to take ages for readers comments to arrive.
Tonight on number 16. Congratulations again, David! Cheers to you!
Made a revisit today. Once again enjoyed reading this poem on the soothing transitions of nature. A rose flower withers to give way for new buds… The laws of Nature! 5* and MyFavouritePoems
Each and every stanza stands out depicting the wonders of twilight and the magic that it brings to nature and humanity. Loved the fourth stanza the most. To my favorites..
What a beautiful poem. The crystalline images transported me to the captivating scenes brought by the changing position of the Sun.
ONE: six stanza worded in a coziest most sweetest way, I have read them all breathlessly, (I have been several times (n the UK) , this twilight I can imagine, but your profound poetic talent, made this absorbing result. TOP Marks, David!
Some need to be entertained by tv or going to the pub. But I like to sit in the cool of the evening in my garden.
..............and the mini-manual-pub within reach, super-excellently thought, David
This gorgeous fascinating poem deserves TOP Marks, true brilliant words used and to myFavourites
Great imageries and beautiful line: Red and yellow dahlias caressed The twilight, where by morning Old petals will have given way To new buds softly emerging. Full *****
Oh, you reminded me those days, thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem, David 5*****
Superb poem, I can relate to it specially when I was in Plymouth last summer one evening I felt the same sitting in my garden when gentle breeze made the rose petals to fly everywhere and sun going down leaving the darkness behind.
Breathtaking description of nature's presence x Top marks David : )
Then LeeAnn you would see my long grey hair, long grey beard, bottle-stop glasses, wooden leg and walking stick!
Dear David, you made yourself unattractive, but LeeAnn has set up her mind, don't you think so?
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7/19/2025 4:38:40 AM # 1.0.0
the imagery superbly illustrates it