Monday, August 11, 2008

Embrace A Hug Comments

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I had a dream that made me sad
I had a dream that made me cry again
I had a dream that made my pillow wet
I had a dream that I wont ever forget
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Brooke Moran
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Eve Anderson 12 April 2009

very well written poem. I really like it. :)

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Gerald Akonz 11 August 2008

'I had a dream that you were leaving for Iraq again and after you told me that I told you, you are my best friend' I love that line, made me move inside, really set you upon a slight climax when you think about that line, you almost begin to ask rheotorical questions about the feelings and emotions of the victim. Thanks for painting your words for me to read.

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