Sunday, August 3, 2008

Embrace Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chastic beauty of full moon
Shades light in my room
Encroaching clouds may
Hide out beauty of moon
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Nancy Sedky 05 August 2008

secure...warmth is what i felt in ur words...one of the best work i've ever read.alot of people love...alot of people write but few who can express &deliver their feelings through simple words...u made it...way 2 go.good luck

0 0 Reply
Rajaram Ramachandran 04 August 2008

How to express one's love and affection? Mankind has found out a way out. Apart from kissing and other methods of expression, embracing is one that expresses one's deep love for the other. A good and rare subject taken for this poem.

0 0 Reply
Sherif Monem 04 August 2008

Great Rohan. What I would add is to break the poem into segments, four lines a piece may be. Leave you in peace. Sherif

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 04 August 2008

The moon has inspired the pen of poets time out of mind. A series of very nice images. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Sherif Monem 03 August 2008

Ver beautiful and Romantic. Great.

0 0 Reply
Rohan Nambiar

Rohan Nambiar

Thalassery
Close
Error Success