Embrace Comments

A very beautiful poem. 10+

oh superb! -------

This is a poet of meetings and I like them very much. I'm remembering the words from a song performed by Natalie Cole: 'Out of your embrace, the world is a temporary parking place...'

what a wonderful poem, you know what its not quite often to hear these words I'm so impressed by this poem I must say that, ......keep it Up! ! ! ! ! !

eternal embrace... thanks...

Embrace of love and hope seducely written!

' The shores of your embrace ', absolutely. A great line. Fabulous. Clear and concise. No wasted words. Perhaps, could have been even shorter. But the reader of such will not complain. Highly recommended. GW62

great 'loving response'...pleasing to read...expressive lines good poetic elements with in...10

You respond to love like a lioness on the prey, , , , , , lovely, ,10 +

Reshma! A beautiful sequel - no other poem, could equal! ! *10*! ! Great read! Best wishes! Friend Thad

The sweetness of those lips Like wine old I get drunk In the contours unknown When I slipped my hands The aroma of the bosom So inviting behind the veil Of thick dark hairs The masculinity of myself When you loosened the grasp Of your embrace against my chest In slow rhythmic movements For the eternal feminine awake In the confines of the softness Of your skin You take me in is my temptation When death is my destiny Besides your glowing face Take the dagger of love out of my hands Into the sheath of your bosom Where it belongs In deep mysteries of love And after death who says We shall part In the depths of the skies In beds of the flowers In the memories of lovers Shall we live forever

Hi Reshma. Yet another pleasurable read well penned. Regards Dave T