Saturday, September 5, 2015

Embers (Triolet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The kiss of twilight comes too soon
Sun's dying embers faintly glow
Dusk's fair cape now heralds the moon
The kiss of twilight comes too soon
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David Wood
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Fabrizio Frosini 13 September 2015

''The kiss of twilight * comes too soon'' il crepuscolo *.. I love such a brief lapse of time, suspended between light and dark.. good work, David

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Kim Barney 05 September 2015

Nicely done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

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