Embers N A Fire Ablaze Comments

Beautiful poem again Krissi

THAT MADE ME SWEAT...IN A GOOD WAY

1 word 'passionate'...very enthralling. better then sex

WOW Krissy..despite i was feeling sleepy before start reading this poem but i continued till the end and loved all the images you said then found me saying wow for the end of your poem..loved it....

A very passionate write, by the image.10++++

each spark has spoke, with the words made out of smoke speaking the words....of my love and lust as each wind gust......................................... yet fire by desire inflames within by lust each flecks of fire flicks by light of love.... ashes from embers mingles into dust and the lover redounds to love....................yet most passionate, yet ingenious write by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing