Monday, May 5, 2008

Embers Comments

Rating: 4.2

Every ember of the fire
clouds a deeper, darker desire.
Orange glow fades as grey
upon our love another day.
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Viola Grey
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Flora Gillingham 16 May 2008

Very delicately done! blow on the embers and renew the fire. Fx

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Antoinette Winter 15 May 2008

This is so graceful and elegant you have incredible talent!

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Who Iam 14 May 2008

This one touched my heart, as it is so uncanty how so many of us experience similar circumstances throughout our life. Well done.

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Stone Granite 11 May 2008

Wonderfully written. ‘Bathed in fire this cold guilt, meets demons we thought killed.’ Oh, how many a man like me can relate. 10.

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Rani Turton 06 May 2008

All of passion and pain expressed with the utmost elegance.

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em blue 06 May 2008

'..love's embers remain a dream' I know the feeling.. thank you for penning it so articulately and beautifully..

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Marvin Brato 05 May 2008

Ember is a flickering fire soon to die, but with love aglow it will come to blaze again as a new day! A 10.

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