Tuesday, February 13, 2007

Embers Comments

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Footsteps on the ground, hands reach down
Gathering tinder from all around.

Crackle and crunch says the dry leaves
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Candy A. LaRock
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Marvin Brato 13 February 2007

When one becomes frustrated in love, life becomes hopeless yet that tiny ember could blaze with hope of loving again when another comes along. Love like life must sustain, for the show must go despite failures. Thank you for sharing your poem, I ejoyed it.

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