Wednesday, September 12, 2018

Elysium's Unfathomable Gate Comments

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When soft whispers invisible as air
alight gently on my senses, I feel
the joy creation brings to one amazed
by words that live and strive for better days.
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Mihaela Pirjol 14 September 2018

The beauty of rhyme and rhythm resonates throughout each line in this poem: the beauty of classical poetry!

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Kostas Lagos 12 September 2018

Your poems amaze me every time! Good work Captain!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

Gently in invisible air this thought comes. The place at the ends of the earth to which certain favoured heroes are generally conveyed by certain power after death is the Elysium to which some fear to measure and some try to measure. Guided by faith charged the cold blinding light, we can think about this. Unfathomable Gate of Elysium amazes mind. All beauty to Earth is brought up. An amazing poem is excellently penned.

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