Elysium Comments

.....ascendency over time, over love....lovely written...........immortal poetry......

This one is very beautiful. As usual, under you pen, a few words tell far more than the numerous words needed to talk about such a subject. Very well written! 10

Lovely fine penning my friend....you composed this perfectly... thanks for sharing Jon

Lovely write Shiraz! Give time to love and paradise you'll have found! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

Beautiful words woven together in this piece, I particularly like the line 'love is the pace' well penned, 10 Lynda xx

my woman recognition of your taste i need i don't have all time to calculate desire less the taste