Elvie Lost In Wonderland Comments

I read DESIRE before this poem and I feel a close connection between the two of them. But this one, written about a week earlier, has a different emotional tone, distanced by the fact that someone else, who doesn't really know Elvie, is describing her from the outside. And is both puzzled and admiring of this person who is lost in her own world, clearly in a state of trance as she wanders through the bliss of memories. You wrote this narrative in a convincing way, it's a gem of characterization. I can only hope to have such experiences that will put me into such a state of fulfillment that I am gripped by my wondrous memories as the world slips by me in its ordinary routines, oblivious to the beauty that holds me transfixed.

A well articulated narrative poem, nicely penned in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing.