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OMG Fi this is so beautiful. So surreal and introspective. Starlight, star bright, I wish I may, I wish I might, have this wish I wish tonight. I used to always say that wne I was growing. Every time I saw the north star I would make my wish. But you know what I found out though? Some wishes aren't granted right away. There is a test from the powers that be in the heavens that put us through a raging set of emotional trials. If we come out of them at a certain still whole, then our wish will be granted. You have done very well this and it is such a cute poem. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing sis. Love & hugs, Barbara

Fi... what a marvellous dance, you needle us with such great imagery... that I don't think 'elusive' really gets a change.. captured brilliantly.. as always, aroha Deana xx

Like so many of your free verse poems, this is a wonderfully written piece filled with terrific and outstanding imagery, Fi. Always a pleasure to read your excellent work. Carl.