Thursday, November 30, 2017

Elusive Silhouette Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm enamored with a shadow,
Someone I've never met,
Someone who taunts me night and day,
A most elusive, silhouette.
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Sandra Feldman
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Jette Blackstone 05 December 2017

This is a beautiful poem. Part of the reason I love it is because it is well-crafted, but really because there are so many ways a reader can interpret the meaning. A search for love of self of another of memory of humankind...all the elusive cloak of the dreaming mind. We know that the truth is there, but its just out of grasp.

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Rebecca Navarre 30 November 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! Ever So Beautifully Woven! ! ! ! ! Ever So Heart Felt! ! ! ! ! Makes A Heart, Melt! ! ! ! ! Beautifully And Powerfully Painted! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many...Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

I dream in spaces narrow and now try to visualize. The shadows escape. Empty dreams project in life. Dreams are unknown and illusion captures them. But having real dream about God is great. Illusion leaves its way. Excellent poem is well penned.10

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