Monday, April 13, 2015

Elucidation Comments

Rating: 5.0

One day I appeared on this earth
With my body and a mind.
But that also I realized to be created
By someone other than me.
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Amitava Sur
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Edward Kofi Louis 06 October 2015

Will witness the infinite peace. Superb!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2015

Realizing the real truth behind That nothing is truly of mine But I own this whole universe So rich a person am I That nothing I need anymore Except the wisdom of DIVINE.........Yes, true speaking. Very nicely presented the poem Elucidation. Meaningful poem I like most. Many thanks.

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Roseann Shawiak 13 April 2015

A very deep and profound poem, Amitava! Thought-provoking at it's best! In this poem you went in a complete circle, while reaching illuminating truths within your being. Takes my breath away, leaves me speechless! The first five lines are starkly amazing! ! Also, the last line: 'So nothing is truly mine' - yet at the same time realizing that you are also a part of the ABSOLUTE, therefore needing nothing anymore except wisdom of the Divine. Truly amazing insight, Amitava, you may have 100 - 10's! ! I've never heard things explained quite like you have done here, Amitava. You have truly witnessed the infinite peace of the Divine. Great write! Thank you, RoseAnn

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