Elucidation Comments

very nice Farah this poem is well compose in a onomatopoeic diction

powerful deep poem good work thanks for sharing

Woooooooooww gorgeous, so touching I love it keep on teacher lol

Powerful and really makes you think. A fantastic poem.

Well, to me, it is not just 'elucidation of time', ... Time has definite, destined missions immortal to keep engaged for ever more. Fleeting human life and its affairs are but light flakes of oblivion. Peeping sharp into the blessed verses of the Holy Quran and a few supporting lines from Respected Allama Iqbal, as orated by Abdul Samad Samadani, Time has such relevance immortal! Comparisons that leads to contrasts and agreements. Wonderfully penned. God Bless, would love to read more when time permits and express my version of thoughts for your attention. Regards.

If perpetrator have an eye on his wickedness; Everyone would be good: Then crime will be committed by whom? , , , , If everyone has piece of mind; Then Who would be deprived? Who would be shined (blessed?) It’s all elucidation of time SO TRUE THINGS YOU JUST SAID, , , ,

A sudden check the reader receives from this poem when this line comes /Decision would be thine./

The directness of thought can catch the readers' mind easily.Loved.

Time is a great reality of this whole universe. You see everything in the callous veracity of Time....glass of wine is a good metaphor. a well-written piece

truth well told....your poems always contain massage which i love the most....the one that makes you think that is thought....a great write mam brilliant...........

Hard to elucidate when it is untold, predict still fine... just let feeling tells and elucidate what it was but what it will have? not so sure...elucidation is secret revelation of time and knowledge...if we know both we can do all_Soul

It's all up to us, isn't it? an elucidation of time.

the ending is super.. i enjoyed it fully, blasting in the following line..Nothing were yours, nothing would be mine. It’s all elucidation of time. Callous veracity in a glass of wine; Take a sip of it Or Put it on the ground Decision would be thine.