Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Elucidation Comments

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In your hour of need.
Who is whimpering?
Who is swindling?
Who is accompanying?
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Farah Ilyas
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 June 2013

very nice Farah this poem is well compose in a onomatopoeic diction

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 June 2013

powerful deep poem good work thanks for sharing

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Amira Remadna 03 June 2013

Woooooooooww gorgeous, so touching I love it keep on teacher lol

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Dave Walker 02 June 2013

Powerful and really makes you think. A fantastic poem.

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Tajudeen Shah 01 June 2013

Well, to me, it is not just 'elucidation of time', ... Time has definite, destined missions immortal to keep engaged for ever more. Fleeting human life and its affairs are but light flakes of oblivion. Peeping sharp into the blessed verses of the Holy Quran and a few supporting lines from Respected Allama Iqbal, as orated by Abdul Samad Samadani, Time has such relevance immortal! Comparisons that leads to contrasts and agreements. Wonderfully penned. God Bless, would love to read more when time permits and express my version of thoughts for your attention. Regards.

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Kanav Justa 01 June 2013

If perpetrator have an eye on his wickedness; Everyone would be good: Then crime will be committed by whom? , , , , If everyone has piece of mind; Then Who would be deprived? Who would be shined (blessed?) It’s all elucidation of time SO TRUE THINGS YOU JUST SAID, , , ,

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Shahzia Batool 30 May 2013

A sudden check the reader receives from this poem when this line comes /Decision would be thine./

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Neela Nath Das 25 May 2013

The directness of thought can catch the readers' mind easily.Loved.

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Yasmin Khan 25 May 2013

Time is a great reality of this whole universe. You see everything in the callous veracity of Time....glass of wine is a good metaphor. a well-written piece

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Payal Parande 24 May 2013

truth well told....your poems always contain massage which i love the most....the one that makes you think that is thought....a great write mam brilliant...........

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Unwritten Soul 23 May 2013

Hard to elucidate when it is untold, predict still fine... just let feeling tells and elucidate what it was but what it will have? not so sure...elucidation is secret revelation of time and knowledge...if we know both we can do all_Soul

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R.j. Wynn 22 May 2013

It's all up to us, isn't it? an elucidation of time.

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Wahab Abdul 22 May 2013

the ending is super.. i enjoyed it fully, blasting in the following line..Nothing were yours, nothing would be mine. It’s all elucidation of time. Callous veracity in a glass of wine; Take a sip of it Or Put it on the ground Decision would be thine.

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Farah Ilyas

Farah Ilyas

Faisalabad, Pakistan
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