Thursday, March 12, 2009

Elo Elo, Yoł And Much...Rap Excitement Comments

Rating: 5.0

a bit too the heat
is too hot
here
is now
...
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Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar
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Nathan Martin 13 March 2009

your poem was fun to read something different is always neat, keep it up..

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Maria Barbara Korynt 13 March 2009

The first step with the poetry here - done and quite decently. Very well you advised yourself, because text contrary to appearances not at all so straight how, can seem. I am waiting for next. :)

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