Ellipses For The Newly Dead Come To Ground Comments
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An ellipsis (plural ellipses; from the Ancient Greek: ἔλλειψις, élleipsis, 'omission' or 'falling short') is a series of dots (typically three, such as "…") that usually indicates an intentional omission of a word, sentence, or whole section from a text without altering its original meaning. - from Wikipedia
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Nicely penned the lamentation in the mould of elegy - the entire crawl space the planet nothing but grief grief all grief and quandry unanswerable /// newly dead has come to ground happiness had but now grief astound....
Such a great write, Warren... congrats for being chosen...10++++
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7/19/2025 12:43:22 AM # 1.0.0
A poem for personal diary, hard to read for lack of punctuation. It could be made into few short poems after revisions. The poem also lacks structure and coherence, and staggers randomly and incomprehensibly.
What's the intent of yer comment? does it serve me or others or yerself? U gave opinion. So what? Feel better now 4 yer terse indication of what U value N a poem? I read yer poetry 2 see if there's anything other than conventional styles 2 learn. Not much. We both revere somesame poets; I honor that. Personal diary is N yer poems 2 that R like journalism. Reporting & flora don't make poetry. The indulgent fields of the Lord R radically open & allowing.