Monday, August 24, 2009

Elizabeth's Dreaming. Comments

Rating: 4.9

He entered the room and measured the crowd.

Ladies in bodiced profusion, high-styled
And primping.
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Fay Slimm
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Now that I can see this is a serial, I will be drawn into this beautiful woman Elizabeth. And, I know you will write it so well with your womanly poetic touch! So far, I am intrigued but must go to the next episode....10 love Karin

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Carol Gall 24 August 2009

intriging conrtinue soon please

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Susan Jarvis 24 August 2009

An intriguing, titillating, potential bodice-ripper of a poem, Fay! Oh for the next installment! S ;)

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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