Thursday, December 3, 2015

Elixir Comments

Rating: 4.5

Hope filled with elixir
Curing all of the gloom
Fate, A new love
Dark clouds all around,
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James Darwin Smith II
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Rajnish Manga 03 December 2015

This should be our mantra of life. Amazing poem. Never giving up / No matter what roadblocks ahead / It ruined my life before / Never will I give in again!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 December 2015

The concluding lines, I am my own cure I create my own hope are dipped in self confidence and it is a reiteration of the fact that God too helps them who help themselves. Very inspirational poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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James Darwin Smith II

James Darwin Smith II

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