Sunday, May 8, 2016

Elimination Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was annoyed of rats and reptiles,
So what if a kitten is dead on the tiles,
I don't kill anyone, I just eliminate,
The kitten was only a victim of his fate,
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Pamela Sinicrope 10 May 2016

I don't kill anyone...I just eliminate. That's a chilling line all alone with nothing else around it. I was first puzzled by this writing until I read your author's note. I see what you are portraying. I also was amazed by the line about beauty and the hat. Scary stuff. Such disregard for life.

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Loke Kok Yee 10 May 2016

A timely reminder in this uncertain times Thank you sir! -10

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

My house should remain neat and clean; but, not for war! ! Nice piece of work.

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Kelly Kurt 09 May 2016

A powerful and poignant poem. This speaks of the mindset of such megalomaniacs. The world is aware of many such genocidal events (I just posted one about the holocaust) but Stalin's terror was many times more horrific and right in front of the world's eyes, yet most have no idea. I am so very glad to see you posting again, my friend. You are eloquent, intelligent and appreciated.

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