Sunday, November 10, 2019

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Its my mother's birthday
Although she's no longer here
I celebrate her life with gladness
Sometimes shedding a few tears
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Angel A. Lockwood
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Bri Edwards 11 November 2019

i assume Nov.11 is Mom's birthday. Happy Birthday, TODAY! first line: It's (a common enough error) aka " it is" i'd use " feel near" , not " feels" i like this poem. bri :)

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Chima Ononogbu 10 November 2019

Happy birthday to her, and may her soul continue to rest in peace. Nice poem. I also lost my mom roughly 9 years ago. I could relate to your feelings.

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