Wednesday, September 13, 2017

Elevation (An Exercise In Metaphor) Comments

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A non-Traditional Haiku, using
metaphor in place of imagery,
yet keeping with the syllabic
requirement of Traditional Ku'.
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Lantz Pierre 13 September 2017

Shame on me? Peshaw. Everything °you° wrote above leads the read down that road. The foreword, the afterword and the inclusion of the word °promiscuously°. If you intended your metaphor to lead elsewhere you did a wonderful job to camouflage it. It is clear from your comments that even you recognize the most obvious interpretation here.

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