Elements Of Love Comments

Revisiting it was so nice, thanks poet for this deeply stirring poem.

Oh I love this poem so much. Revisitiing it after a few months.

On the Space line- That extends over births, That extends along Earths- so clear expressed how everything is connected through love. Enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing! 10++++

On the Space line- That extends over births, That extends along Earths- so clear expressed how everything is connected through love. Enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing!

Down the valleys of my heart, Down the corridors of my emptiness Sensible and warm kisses flood! ! Lovely poem shared. 10+++

The four Phases Of my life- Scattered over them Like the elements of cosmos, Like the elements of life The Breeze of love Blows over the Oceans- Ocean of loneliness, Ocean of exiles! Beautiful lines in this lovely poem. 10++ for it. Thanks for sharing the poem. Neetu

The four Phases Of my life- Scattered over them Like the elements of cosmos, Like the elements of life. Beautiful expression about the cosmic elements. Love it.

Down the valleys of my heart. Nice work.

A very good and lovely poem Sir. The elements include the four Bhoots, the soil, water, air, fire..leaving the fifth space. Nice concept sir A 10 for the poem. Seems Devi

Excellent poem, loved it but these lines touched me: On the timeline, On the Space line- That extends over births, That extends along Earths- so clear expressed how everything is connected through love. Enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing!