Friday, February 5, 2010

Elements Of Inspiration Comments

Rating: 3.9

Embrace tightly the Fire
to burn-out all the doubts
that may trigger the negativity devour one’s life,
to lit up the seraphly confidence
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Ena N. Mori 12 April 2010

This is a wonderful write and deserves a 10+.

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Antonio Liao 07 February 2010

Excellent poetry.....the expression is just like the resemblance of William Shakespeare on his literature lines.....keep on going....you do well inspire other....in the world of poetry...A Star and a 10 +++++

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Woo Who 07 February 2010

i really liked, loved, your poem man

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Jude Ogunade 06 February 2010

You sound like my 'brothers' those with whom I am yet to commune, in fact, keepling yard of ruder was such a brother! Tell me Allen, are you one of my 'brothers'. You surely sound like one, and thanks for this sweet inspiration. An inspiration to a soul that aspire to inspire and to ascend! Thanks for this

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 February 2010

Great use of vocabulary. Well penned. Nice poem Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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Wang Qian 06 February 2010

So Wonderful! Inspiration is really charming as you write! Fantastic.

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A beautiful poem. fine writing.

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Fay Slimm 05 February 2010

The opening lines set the scene with their fresh and poetic imagery, followed by more perceptive vocabulary - - in all a fine contribution to a greater understanding of the titled subject. - - well written.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 05 February 2010

Captivating...the elements of inspiration fly off the page into one's consciousness. Good write.

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Kranthi Pothineni 05 February 2010

Universe is made up of five elements namely earth, sky, water, fire and wind. We get inspiration for all these elements.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 05 February 2010

yeah.... you are truly an Asian.... a Filipino! wow... so amazing... thanks for sharing this.

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Hussein Ahmed 05 February 2010

Nice use of vocabulary. Great interesting poem.

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Frankie Stamey 05 February 2010

This poem itself is an element of inspiration! ! Awesome! !

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