Elemental Me Comments

Inspired write with great lines, we our part of nature and forces to be reckoned with!

I like these elemental similes, how they connect man to nature and bind them in a shield of strength and invulnerability.

this poem reflects man's ideal. I love your style.

very nice man, emotionally charged

Always remember, which Im pretty sure you know from reading this poem, that you are always you and nobody else's puppet to toy with. Everyone is individual. I love your writing style. Keep on writing. You have a talent.

an interesting poem..lovely to read/ great work! ! ...keep expressing

tells a lot about how you feel... very in depth..... i like it

This one is really good... amazing actually

wonderful work... expressing urself from whats around.... nice work

hey sounds great i could not have done better myself

its beautiful... i luv the way you worked the four elements in to it! ! ! ! ...(>_<)

greatly written nice

Greatly written. I love how you speak about who you really are. Keep up the good work. <3