Tuesday, August 28, 2007

Element Of Coalesce Comments

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One has distress
Another’s got a hopeless longing
There exists such sorrow
Our precious treasured element
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Aiden Florence
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Janelle Morehart 11 September 2007

Affection, Connection and Love. A few of the many values in the humankind. Too much of it fabricated through meaningless lies. Does that make them non-exsistant or rare? Either way I feel that this poem depicts the answer to my question. To those who are desperate it is rare and to those in distress it is non-exsistant. Great work as always, i look forward to more writing.

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