Saturday, September 5, 2009

Elegy Upon Undoing Love Forever Comments

Rating: 4.0

I cease for the importance of humanity
I know ot if mine was a desire or necessity
The fire had died out
The cold had no more clout
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Zainab Amjad 27 February 2010

Whoever she is, she is a great muse.

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Philip Winchester 11 October 2009

Forget this Girl and Move on. She loses a Good Poet, the Poem I fear Suffers from your breaking heart, Forget this Girl and Move on. Before you do rewrite it to make better sense, then screw into a ball and throw away, Forget this Girl and Move ON. Forget Not you still owe me a Poem. Forget this Girl and Move On make of that the very Title. Kind Regards Philip

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Mystic Indian 10 September 2009

beautiful Ghazal like quality.10/10

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